修改一篇英语作文

P1 There is[这样会比较好，意思不变，因为接下来还有个地方有相同的意思] a [Public Transport Week ]activity 大写活动/节日名称for the first time in the city from 16th to 20th [September],2007. 9月大写。This activity will hold [ 这样就不用2句都采用相同的表达方式]in beijing,shanghai,tianjin and some other cities[ so on ,别人怎么知道接下来是哪里，我觉得最好说清楚]

P2..时态错了 It will be held in about 108 cities at the same time .During the activities 'time .the cities will call on people to get the conception of green transport and choose to walk , take a bus, or ride the bike when they go out . On one hand it can sustainable recover [ can 是情态动词 ] On the other hand,It also can protect our environment . Dear fellow freind.,Let's create a better life[要用这个词] . , .thins is a meanning ful thing. We should do it together and hand in hand .[这两句是有点多余]

ps ：时态错误比较多哦,建议多看看语法书。

我觉得应该修改的都在文章里该好了 括号里的是原因。

sustainable 的副词形式是什么

应该是sustainably（如果它不是特殊情况的话……囧~ 你不提这个问题我还真没注意到~）

语法上的一点困惑

最近在看考研的语法精讲，里面好多分析句子成分的，所以我来试一下吧：

问题1、She exhibits the ideali**是这句话的主句，common to 做后置定语（common  (to **/sth) ，固定搭配，英语解释为shared by, belonging to, done by or affecting two or more

people, or most of a group or society即：共有的; 共同做的; 共同受到的）。因为proponent 为 建议者, 支持者的意思，所以，common to many advocates of sustainability实际上做的是she的后置定语。

be+主语=whether…or…或no matter how… ，所以be it in food or in energy=whether it may be in food or in energy.所以这句是从句。

问题2、最后一句想要表达的意思是：因为人们的虚荣心是不变的（即人的虚荣心不会消失——这是人的本性吧），所以只要他们能够负担的起，他们就会持续的消费。结合全文，作者想要表达快消费的不好——waste 。前面虽然说了，一些公司已经采取了一些措施，但是（段首的Though

）Vanity is a constant，只要人们能够负担的起（因为便宜），他们就会持续的消费。故不能翻译为否定的（即“当他们不能负担这种行为的时候”），所以翻译错了。·

文章地址：（2012 年 6 月 21 日 出版的 (美国) 商业周刊 (Businessweek) ），要翻（和？谐）墙。

这是我的理解。

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sustainability的副词形式

sustainably。

sustainability是名词，表示持续性的，副词的汉意表达是可持续性地。

它的其他形式：形容词sustainable，动词sustain，名词sustainability。

急求～英语翻译

Speaking of the afternoon tea, you have certainly thought of the famous English afternoon tea. China's tea culture history is glorious, in the Western country, likes the tea by the English being more frantic. The Chinese drinks tea is fastidious about the culture, but the English afternoon tea must have the fine sweets appropriate match, in the spirit even more relaxes, “enjoys” is the most appropriate ****ogy. in Britain, drank the afternoon tea already to become one kind of social activity. In Britain's hotel, the big Department store, must have the afternoon tea time, the time starts from afternoon about 2:00, sustainably to five o'clock about. The tea set is the high-quality bone China tea set, the silver nature **all teaspoon and the complete set milk pot, the sugar container, **all dessert by sandwich, **all sweet snack, buffalo and cow horns bread primarily. Has lived in Britain the friend describes in the Li this hotel great hall like the afternoon tea scene: Puts on elegant ladies to wear the famous Gucci wristwatch, demonstrates their charm suitably at this meeting's public situation. Drinks one time in such hotel the afternoon tea, each person's expense must about 20-25 dollars. but according to gets off the subject in Victoria the time, the afternoon tea time is not true wonderfully, at that time, is idle the loquacious women use afternoon's leisure time, in tea fragrant complementing, is somewhat excited, some envies to discuss others' private life. Luckily, society's development already extricated to woman's fetter, the life space expansion has caused the women no longer to limit to the narrow and **all world, relaxed afternoon tea time, really turned has enjoyed. Therefore in friend meeting time, chooses the leisurely and carefree afternoon tea time, bathes in the spring day sunlight, lets us relax mood - - in light of the pure English noon tea, is swells directly by the tea, has tea again leaks filters the tea dregs to be able to pour into the bosom to drink. Generally speaking, in the afternoon and the evening drinks the tea does not have what difference, definitely may defer to likes carrying on the choice personally. In the home, in the hotel also has generally is from Britain's packed in bags tea package, swells is more convenient. in the tea type, the lucky range tea and the count tea is the English most loves, other like English sandwiches, the **all sweet snack, the buffalo and cow horns bread and the imperial black tea are also the quite common several kinds. drinks the afternoon tea people to have the impression, comes along with the tea also to have the slice lemon and the milk pot, international club hotel's dining inspector general Martin Zerk tells us, the lemon adds generally in the black tea, but joins the milk in the tea to do the principle only then the English only then to compare likes, are very generally few in other European country drinks like this. enjoys the afternoon tea not to be able to leave music and the beautiful spot. Manufactures the fine elegant **all dessert, including the sandwich, the pure taste raisin kaobing matches the cream, the butter and the jam, the cheese buffalo and cow horns package, the pudding, the fruit tower, the coffee chocolate admires the department, the apricot taste cream sweet cake and so on. Under these many sweets' enticement, believed that nobody can insist again loses weight determination.

sustainably什么意思

英文：sustainably

中文：可持续发展

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